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                                         Oh boy, boy, boy
For the last shall be,
and that arctic disposition will melt away in time
written on a hearth rug, read it and then
turn the dial back and tune into Goodbye FM

                                        "Oh boy, boy, boy
               Goldilocks should have been clad in HazMat,
               bear in mind the Gouda enacts the rat trap"

For the last shall be,
when fractals free fall from the sky
thickening icycle eyes, cementing prisms with time
...and I
measured it all in half-life

                                          Oh boy, boy boy
That arctic disposition will melt away in time
Until then, I hope you die from frostbite
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hater12 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
oh my. i'm confused, an in love...?
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Apocapus Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
Bravo
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Shadowxiao Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
This is a fantastic piece. A well-deserved DD!
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VelvetFish Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Student Filmographer
i love it. :D
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Spagettimoon Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love love love love looooovve
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Karinta Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Student General Artist
I love the repetition, and the half rhyme. It's cyclic, yet free-form.
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remnants-of-life Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
This is amazing! I love how it's so abstract; it doesn't make any sense at first but then I begin to see things in it. I can see why it got a DD!
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GoldenEarthAngel Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I have no idea what it's about, but the poem has lovely imagery. :D Congrats for the DD.
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the DD! :heart:
Have a nice day! : )
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glossolalias Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
congratulations on the DD!
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