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                                         Oh boy, boy, boy
For the last shall be,
and that arctic disposition will melt away in time
written on a hearth rug, read it and then
turn the dial back and tune into Goodbye FM

                                        "Oh boy, boy, boy
               Goldilocks should have been clad in HazMat,
               bear in mind the Gouda enacts the rat trap"

For the last shall be,
when fractals free fall from the sky
thickening icycle eyes, cementing prisms with time
...and I
measured it all in half-life

                                          Oh boy, boy boy
That arctic disposition will melt away in time
Until then, I hope you die from frostbite
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Given 2012-12-21
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hater12 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
oh my. i'm confused, an in love...?
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Apocapus Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
Bravo
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Shadowxiao Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
This is a fantastic piece. A well-deserved DD!
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VelvetFish Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Student Filmographer
i love it. :D
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Spagettimoon Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love love love love looooovve
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Karinta Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Student General Artist
I love the repetition, and the half rhyme. It's cyclic, yet free-form.
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remnants-of-life Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012   Digital Artist
This is amazing! I love how it's so abstract; it doesn't make any sense at first but then I begin to see things in it. I can see why it got a DD!
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GoldenEarthAngel Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I have no idea what it's about, but the poem has lovely imagery. :D Congrats for the DD.
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the DD! :heart:
Have a nice day! : )
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glossolalias Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
congratulations on the DD!
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LadyofGaerdon Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Professional Writer
:wave: Hi! Your piece has been featured as inspiration in #Lit-Visual-Alliance's Winter Alliance Contest article! Please :+fav: the article to bring more attention to the features and the contest. Thanks! :)
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by =DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here: [link]

Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article. Keep writing and keep creating.
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maxusphinneas Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
Thank you very much!! I will be sure to look at all the other wonderful work on there.
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glossolalias Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
your work has been featured here: [link] please go check out the other pieces & have a nice day :heart:
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maxusphinneas Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
Ah, that is very nice, I am quite flattered. I shall look at the other works you have featured.
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glossolalias Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
you're welcome & ty
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glossolalias Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
this is very impressive work. gorgeous.
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